Fund Free Health Care for Everyone
The right to health is a fundamental part of human rights and our
understanding of a dignified life. The right to enjoy the highest standards of
physical, and mental health that can be achieved. In Indonesia, there are many
people who have not been able to enjoy high standards of physical and mental
health. Therefore, I agree with the statement that the government should
provide free healthcare funds through taxes paid by the public. Here are some
of my arguments about my agreement with the statement above.
First, its human rights to get the protection of lives, one of the
government’s responsibilities is to make sure their citizens’ right to life is
kept because human rights are one of the most important values. And this is in
accordance with the statement in the constitution of article 34 paragraph 3 of
1945 in which the State is responsible for providing adequate health care
facilities and public service facilities. One of the ways is to provide free
health services to the community, with this in mind that people from the rich
and the poor will feel more respected by their country and also gives them
protection of life.
The second reason is increasing economic benefit, a good health care
system will give a contribution to the economy of the country because by having
the universal health care it will reduce the amount that company used to
provide health insurance. For example,
Japan has a universal health care system. Toyota’s production cost is 1400 dollars
lower than the cost of American manufacturers. It’s lead to a competitive
advantage for Japan and creating benefits for Japan as the country.
And the last is increasing taxpayers’ willingness in paying taxes,
by giving free health care as one of the benefits in paying tax will attract
the taxpayers to pay their taxes. As we know in Indonesia the tax system has already
run well and it has clear rules and regulations. By paying taxes people can
give their contribution to help others to get their rights to life through free
health care programs.
Some people think that providing free health care causing the over
budget by the governments, which leads the other sector needs to cover the over
budget and its decrease the economic benefits for the country, but the fact is
that Japan as one of the countries that have a free healthcare system actually
has a competitive advantage because they can produce goods cheaper than
countries that do not provide these facilities and charge them to companies. This
proves that providing free health care also provides economic benefits and free
health care funds through taxes can increase state revenues compared to paying
for insurance companies.


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ReplyDeleteAccording to the WHO article the right to health is a fundamental part of human rights and our understanding of a dignified life. The right to enjoy the highest standards of physical, and mental health that can be achieved. In Indonesia, there are many people who have not been able to enjoy high standards of physical and mental health. Therefore, I agree with the statement that the government should provide free healthcare funds through taxes paid by the public. Here are some of my arguments about my agreement with the statement above.
ReplyDeleteFirst, its human rights to get the protection of lives, one of the government’s responsibilities is to make sure their citizens’ right to life is kept because it’s one of the most important values. And this is in accordance with the statement in the constitution of article 34 paragraph 3 of 1945. One of the ways is to provide free health services to the community, with this in mind that people from the rich and the poor will feel more respected by their country and also gives them protection of life.
The second reason is increasing economic benefit, a good health care system will give a contribution to the economy of the country because by having the universal health care it will reduce the amount that company used to provide health insurance. For example, Japan has a universal health care system. Toyota’s production cost is 1400 dollars lower than the cost of American manufacturers. It’s lead to a competitive advantage and economic benefits for Japan.
And the last is increasing taxpayers’ willingness in paying taxes, by giving free health care as one of the benefits in paying tax will attract the taxpayers to pay their taxes. As we know in Indonesia the tax system has already run well and it has clear rules and regulations. By paying taxes people can give their contribution to help others to get their rights to life through free health care programs.
Some people think that providing free health care causing the over budget by the governments, which leads the other sector needs to cover the over budget and its decrease the economic benefits for the country, but the fact is that Japan as one of the countries that have a free healthcare system actually has a competitive advantage because they can produce goods cheaper than who’s not. This proves that providing free health care also provides economic benefits and free health care funds through taxes can increase state revenues compared to paying for insurance companies.
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