A. Essay Outline
B. Essay
Topic Sentence
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In Indonesia some of the positive impacts in
education are the ease of accessing information, improving the quality of
education and increasing opportunities for student exchanges.
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Supporting example 1
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In Indonesia, the influence of globalization in
the world of education makes it easier for students to access education
information
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Supporting example 2
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The increasing quality of education in Indonesia
is also one of the positive effects of globalization.
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Supporting example 3
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Student exchange in the world Education often
occurs in the era of globalization
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Concluding sentence
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in summary, globalization has affected education
in Indonesia. There are many positive impacts that can be obtained from
globalization. In Indonesia, globalization in the world of Education can
improve the quality of education, ease of access to information and
opportunities for student exchanges.
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B. Essay
Globalization in Indonesian Education
Globalization
can affect many aspects of a country such as culture, national defense,
politics, and education. There are many positive influences from globalization,
for example in education. In Indonesia, some of the positive impacts in
education are the ease of accessing information, improving the quality of
education and increasing opportunities for student exchanges.
In Indonesia,
the influence of globalization in the world of education makes it easier for
students to access educational information. One example is the presence of
sites that provide books in digital form that can be downloaded and used as
references in the teaching and learning process.
The increasing
quality of education in Indonesia is also one of the positive effects of
globalization. One of the factors is the technology advances, it’s turned out
to have a positive impact on improving the quality of education. For example, previously
a teacher had to write on the board. Now with the existence of technology,
teachers can use computers and the internet to combine writing, images, sound,
video and even movies to facilitate the delivery of knowledge.
Student
exchange in the world Education often occurs in the era of globalization. Students
have the opportunity to study abroad, students are also required to be able to
adapt to the new environment and be able to know and understand the culture
abroad. From statistical data in 2010 Indonesian students in Europe recorded
4000 lives and that continued to grow until the end of 2013 which reached 7000
people.
In summary,
globalization has affected education in Indonesia. There are many positive
impacts that can be obtained from globalization. In Indonesia, globalization in
the world of Education can improve the quality of education, ease of access to
information and opportunities for student exchanges.

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ReplyDeleteGlobalization in Indonesian’s Education
Globalization can affect many aspects of a country such as culture, national defense, politics, and education. There are many positive influences from globalization, for example in education. In Indonesia, some of the positive impacts in education are the ease of accessing information, improving the quality of education and increasing opportunities for student exchanges.
In Indonesia, the influence of globalization in the world of education makes it easier for students to access educational information. For example, is the presence of sites that provide books in digital form that can be downloaded and used as references in the teaching and learning process.
The increasing quality of education in Indonesia is also one of the positive effects of globalization. One of the factors is the technology advances, it’s turned out to have a positive impact on improving the quality of education. For example, previously a teacher had to write on the board. Nowadays with the existence of technology, teachers can use computers and the internet to combine writing, images, sound, video and even movies to facilitate the delivery of knowledge.
Student exchange in the world Education often occurs in the era of globalization. Students have the opportunity to study abroad, students are also required to be able to adapt to the new environment and be able to know and understand the culture abroad. From statistical data in 2010 Indonesian students in Europe recorded 4000 lives and that continued to grow until the end of 2013 which reached 7000 people.
In summary, globalization has affected education in Indonesia. There are many positive impacts that able to be obtained from globalization. In Indonesia, globalization in the world of Education able to improve the quality of education, ease of access to information and opportunities for student exchanges.
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