Globalization in Indonesian Education

A. Essay Outline

Topic Sentence
In Indonesia some of the positive impacts in education are the ease of accessing information, improving the quality of education and increasing opportunities for student exchanges.

Supporting example 1
In Indonesia, the influence of globalization in the world of education makes it easier for students to access education information

Supporting example 2
The increasing quality of education in Indonesia is also one of the positive effects of globalization.

Supporting example 3
Student exchange in the world Education often occurs in the era of globalization

Concluding sentence
in summary, globalization has affected education in Indonesia. There are many positive impacts that can be obtained from globalization. In Indonesia, globalization in the world of Education can improve the quality of education, ease of access to information and opportunities for student exchanges.


B. Essay


Globalization in Indonesian Education




Globalization can affect many aspects of a country such as culture, national defense, politics, and education. There are many positive influences from globalization, for example in education. In Indonesia, some of the positive impacts in education are the ease of accessing information, improving the quality of education and increasing opportunities for student exchanges.

In Indonesia, the influence of globalization in the world of education makes it easier for students to access educational information. One example is the presence of sites that provide books in digital form that can be downloaded and used as references in the teaching and learning process.

The increasing quality of education in Indonesia is also one of the positive effects of globalization. One of the factors is the technology advances, it’s turned out to have a positive impact on improving the quality of education. For example, previously a teacher had to write on the board. Now with the existence of technology, teachers can use computers and the internet to combine writing, images, sound, video and even movies to facilitate the delivery of knowledge.

Student exchange in the world Education often occurs in the era of globalization. Students have the opportunity to study abroad, students are also required to be able to adapt to the new environment and be able to know and understand the culture abroad. From statistical data in 2010 Indonesian students in Europe recorded 4000 lives and that continued to grow until the end of 2013 which reached 7000 people.

In summary, globalization has affected education in Indonesia. There are many positive impacts that can be obtained from globalization. In Indonesia, globalization in the world of Education can improve the quality of education, ease of access to information and opportunities for student exchanges.


Comments

  1. Hallo, i am so appreciate on your essay but for betterment that you can change sentence one example become for example. You can't to add to be there, thank you

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  2. A lot of great things can happen because of globalization especially in Indonesia. I agree with you on this. Great article, keep it up!

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  3. It's good. Because your essay contains more than 250 -300 words. Good work!

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  4. Great article! You presented clearly from the outline and it is very insightful. Keep up the good works!

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  5. what a good essay dea, good job ;)

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  6. Hi Dea, it's a good essay because it is in accordance with the outline that you have made. GoodJob!!!

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  7. Hi dea. Its a good topic and essay. Good job!!

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  9. Im so excited to read your essay. Good job deaaa!!

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  10. Haii dea, it’s good essay. Overall good .But i think you haven't academic words e. g "now" you can change it into nowdays. To make it better, you can add it. Good job!!

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  11. Your essay giving me insight of how important the globalization to our education. nice essay!

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  12. Hi Dea! Based on our lecturer explanation, we should changes the word "can" to "capable". But, overall your essay is already good.

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  13. hi dea, i’ve read your essay and i found it was a very good essay! the way you choose your sentences makes the readers especially me undestood, and it was very good because you put the time phares according to period of the time. Good job

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  14. Revision:

    Globalization in Indonesian’s Education

    Globalization can affect many aspects of a country such as culture, national defense, politics, and education. There are many positive influences from globalization, for example in education. In Indonesia, some of the positive impacts in education are the ease of accessing information, improving the quality of education and increasing opportunities for student exchanges.
    In Indonesia, the influence of globalization in the world of education makes it easier for students to access educational information. For example, is the presence of sites that provide books in digital form that can be downloaded and used as references in the teaching and learning process.
    The increasing quality of education in Indonesia is also one of the positive effects of globalization. One of the factors is the technology advances, it’s turned out to have a positive impact on improving the quality of education. For example, previously a teacher had to write on the board. Nowadays with the existence of technology, teachers can use computers and the internet to combine writing, images, sound, video and even movies to facilitate the delivery of knowledge.
    Student exchange in the world Education often occurs in the era of globalization. Students have the opportunity to study abroad, students are also required to be able to adapt to the new environment and be able to know and understand the culture abroad. From statistical data in 2010 Indonesian students in Europe recorded 4000 lives and that continued to grow until the end of 2013 which reached 7000 people.
    In summary, globalization has affected education in Indonesia. There are many positive impacts that able to be obtained from globalization. In Indonesia, globalization in the world of Education able to improve the quality of education, ease of access to information and opportunities for student exchanges.

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  15. Hiii deaaaa... your essay is very good and the outline is very clear so i can understand your essayy.... goooddd job!!!!

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  16. its a very good topic, very nice essay easy to understand and the sentence are clear great job

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