A. Essay Outline
B. Essay
Skincare Routine
I. Introductory Paragraph
Introduction:
Sentence 1: Skin care is the range of practices that support skin integrity, enhance its appearance and relieve skin conditions. Skin care is a routine daily procedure in many settings, such as skin that is either too dry or too moist, and prevention of dermatitis and prevention of skin injuries.
Sentence 2: it’s very important to take care your skin, and we need to do it routine. There are many steps in doing skincare and everyone has their own way and steps depends on their needs.
Thesis Statement: My skincare routine is not really complicated, there are three types of my skincare routine, morning skincare routine, night-time skincare, and weekly exfoliation.
II. Body
a. Paragraph 1: Morning face routine
Topic sentence: morning skincare are important for your skin because it’s about protected and preserve your skin for all day activities and also to bring out your natural glow.
Major Support 1: Face wash
Minor Support:
- First thing to do before applying any skincare
- With clean face any skincare are easily absorb
- Washing face with facial wash and water
- My favorite product is tea tree facial wash by the body shop
Major Support 2: Toner
Minor Support:
- Apply after facial wash
- For double cleansing and make sure it’s already clean
- Pour few drops to cotton and wipe it to your face
- My favorite toner is tea tree mattifying toner by the body shop
Major Support 3: Serum
Minor Support:
- Vitamin for your skin
- Pour few drops into your hands, activate it and apply it to your face
- My favorite serum is Vitamin E serum by the body shop
Major Support 4: Moisturizer
Minor Support:
- Keep your skin moist and hydrate all day
- Take the moisturizer in your finger as much as you need and apply it to your face
- My favorite product is soothing gel by nature republic
Major Support 5: Sunscreen
Minor Support:
- To protect your skin from UV A and UV b
- The most important skincare before starting the day
- Apply a finger of it and apply it to your face and neck
- My favorite product is daily protection from elsheskin
Concluding sentence: that’s all the steps I need to prepare and protect my skin as my morning skincare routine, and I like it because it’s makes my face look good.
b. Paragraph 2: Night-time skincare routine
Topic sentence: Night-time skincare aims to address skin issues before the regenerative process of sleep begins.
Major Support 1: Makeup Remover
Minor Support:
- First thing to remove all the makeup
- Pour few drops into cotton and wipe to your face
- My favorite product is micellar water by safi
Major Support 2: Face Wash
Minor Support:
- To clean the leftover after micellar water to double cleanse your face
- Wash your face with facial wash and water
- My favorite product is tea tree by the body shop
Major Support 3: Sheet Mask
Minor Support:
- It helps to moist your skin and get rid dull skin
- Apply your sheet mask for around 15 minutes and pat slowly
- My favorite product is mediheal sheet mask
Major Support 4: Essence
Minor Support:
- It helps nourish your skin
- Pour it in your hands and apply it to your face
- My favorite product is COSRX snail essence
Concluding sentence: all above is my night-time skincare routine, I love it because it’s makes my face glow in the next day.
c. Paragraph 3: Weekly exfoliating
topic sentence: exfoliation is removing your dry/dead skin cells on the surface of the skin and is one of the most important aspects of your home skincare routine for face and body, and exfoliation not only helps many skin problems, it also increases blood circulation, which in turn helps you to achieve healthy and glowing skin.
Major Support 1: Physical Exfoliation
Minor Support:
- physical exfoliate can be identified by its "sandy" texture and feels rough on the skin.
- My favorite product is St. Ives Blemish Control Apricot Scrub
Major Support 2: Chemical Exfoliation
Minor Support:
- Chemical exfoliates use enzymatic materials
- My favorite product is COSRX AHA/BHA Clarifying Treatment Toner
Concluding sentence: that’s all kind of exfoliation, I don’t exfoliate with both types, and it’s important to do exfoliation because it renews your face skin.
III. Concluding Paragraph:
In conclusion all the three-skincare routine I do is my favorite things, because beside it is healthy for your skin, it is also fun things to do. Not everyone has the same steps or the same skincare product they like but still, it’s very important to maintain your skin healthy and beauty especially when you are wearing makeup every day, because if your skin is amazing you will have a glowing vibe every day.
Skincare routine
Skin care is
the range of practices that support skin integrity, enhance its appearance and
relieve skin conditions. Skin care is a routine daily procedure in many
settings, such as skin that is either too dry or too moist, and prevention
of dermatitis and
prevention of skin injuries. it’s very important to take care your skin, and we
need to do it routine. There are many steps in doing skincare and everyone has
their own way and steps depends on their needs. My skincare routine is not
really complicated, there are three types of my skincare routine, morning
skincare routine, night-time skincare, and weekly exfoliation.
Morning face
routine, morning skincare are important for your skin because it’s about protected
and preserve your skin for all day activities and I like it because they also
bring out your natural glow. First my skincare routine started with face wash,
it is the first thing to do before applying any skincare, because with clean
face any skincare are easily absorb. I wash my face with facial foam and rinse
it with clean water. My favorite product is tea tree facial wash by the body
shop. Second is toner, toner is a water-based liquid with vinegar-like
consistency that contains active ingredients to help deal with certain problems,
I usually applying it after facial wash for double cleansing and make sure it’s
already clean, I poured few drops to cotton and wipe it to my face. My favorite
toner is tea tree mattifying toner by the body shop. Third is serum, serum is
like the vitamin for your skin, I usually use it by pour few drops into my
hands, activate it and apply it to my face. My favorite serum is Vitamin E serum
by the body shop. Fourth is Moisturizer, it helps your skin to hydrate and
moist all day, you can take the moisturizer in your finger as much as you need
and apply it to your face. My favorite product is soothing gel by nature
republic. And the last is sunscreen, sunscreen will help protect my skin from
UV A and UV B, and it is the most important skincare before starting the day,
because the UV light can expose your skin even inside the building. I use
sunscreen by apply a finger of it and apply it to my face and neck. My favorite
product is daily protection from Elsheskin. That’s all the steps I need to prepare
and protect my skin as my morning skincare routine, and I like it because it’s
makes my face look good.
My next
favorite things is doing Night-time skincare routine. Night-time skincare also
important because it is aims to address skin issues before the regenerative
process of sleep begins. The first step is Makeup remover, after using makeup
all day long it’s important to clean them all before putting any skincare, I usually
do it by pour few drops into cotton and wipe to your face. My favorite product
is micellar water by Safi. Second is face wash, it is important to make sure
there is no leftover makeup after cleaning it with micellar water or makeup
remover, I usually wash my face with facial wash and clean them with warm water
to relax my skin more. My favorite product is tea tree by the body shop. Third is
sheet mask, Sheet masks are face masks that are sheet-shaped and are usually
made of natural fibres such as paper, cotton, cellulose, or coconut pulp. This
sheet usually has gone through a chemical process enriched with serum and water
as its main ingredient. Generally, these masks are made with various vitamins,
minerals and certain protein content according to the type and benefits
offered. I like it because it helps my skin moist and get rid of dull skin, I usually
use it for around 15 minutes, and after that I pat slowly my face to make the
serum absorb more to my skin. My favorite product is mediheal sheet mask. The last
part is essence, essence is like toner or oil which has high vitamin content and
it helps nourish your skin. I like it because it nourishes my skin into the
deepest part of my skin layers. My favorite product is COSRX snail essence. All
above is my night-time skincare routine, I love it because it’s makes my face
glow in the next day.
And the last
is weekly exfoliating, exfoliation is removing your dry/dead skin cells on the
surface of the skin and is one of the most important aspects of your home
skincare routine for face and body, and exfoliation not only helps many skin
problems, it also increases blood circulation, which in turn helps you to
achieve healthy and glowing skin. There are two kind of exfoliation, first is
Physical exfoliation. Physical exfoliate can be identified by its
"sandy" texture and feels rough on the skin. Generally, the
ingredients used in physical exfoliates are natural such as grains, sugar,
salt, and plant extracts. I like physical exfoliation because the ingredients
are natural so it’s safe for my skin and it removes all dead skin cells on my
face. My favorite product is St. Ives Blemish Control Apricot Scrub. Second is
Chemical exfoliation, in Chemical exfoliates they use enzymatic materials, the
enzyme will then help spur the growth of new skin cells when dead skin cells
have been lifted. I like chemical exfoliate because chemical exfoliate tends
to be gentler when used compared to physical exfoliate. My favorite product is
COSRX AHA/BHA Clarifying Treatment Toner. That’s all kind of exfoliation, I don’t
exfoliate with both types at one time, but still it’s important to do
exfoliation because it renews your face skin.
In conclusion
all the three-skincare routine I do is my favorite things, because beside it is
healthy for your skin, it is also fun things to do. Not everyone has the same
steps or the same skincare product they like but still, it’s very important to
maintain your skin healthy and beauty especially when you are wearing makeup
every day, because if your skin is amazing you will have a glowing vibe every
day.
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ReplyDeleteSkincare Routine
ReplyDeleteI. Introductory Paragraph
Introduction:
Sentence 1: Skin care is the range of practices that support skin integrity, enhance its appearance and relieve skin conditions. Skin care is a routine daily procedure in many settings, such as skin that is either too dry or too moist, and prevention of dermatitis and prevention of skin injuries.
Sentence 2: it’s very important to take care your skin, and we need to do it routine. There are many steps in doing skincare and everyone has their own way and steps depends on their needs.
Thesis Statement: My skincare routine is not really complicated, there are three types of my skincare routine, morning skincare routine, night-time skincare, and weekly exfoliation.
II. Body
a. Paragraph 1: Morning face routine
Topic sentence: morning skincare are important for your skin because it’s about protected and preserve your skin for all day activities and also to bring out your natural glow.
Major Support 1: Face wash
Minor Support:
- First thing to do before applying any skincare
- With clean face any skincare are easily absorb
- Washing face with facial wash and water
- My favorite product is tea tree facial wash by the body shop
Major Support 2: Toner
Minor Support:
- Apply after facial wash
- For double cleansing and make sure it’s already clean
- Pour few drops to cotton and wipe it to your face
- My favoite toner is tea tree mattifying toner by the body shop
Major Support 3: Serum
Minor Support:
- Vitamin for your skin
- Pour few drops into your hands, activate it and apply it to your face
- My favorite serum is Vitamin E serum by the body shop
Major Support 4: Moisturizer
Minor Support:
- Keep your skin moist and hydrate all day
- Take the moisturizer in your finger as much as you need and apply it to your face
- My favorite product is soothing gel by nature republic
Major Support 5: Sunscreen
Minor Support:
- To protect your skin from UV A and UV b
- The most important skincare before starting the day
- Apply a finger of it and apply it to your face and neck
- My favorite product is daily protection from elsheskin
Concluding sentence: that’s all the steps I need to prepare and protect my skin as my morning skincare routine, and I like it because it’s makes my face look good.
b. Paragraph 2: Night-time skincare routine
Topic sentence: Night-time skincare aims to address skin issues before the regenerative process of sleep begins.
Major Support 1: Makeup Remover
Minor Support:
- First thing to remove all the makeup
- Pour few drops into cotton and wipe to your face
- My favorite product is micellar water by safi
Major Support 2: Face Wash
Minor Support:
- To clean the leftover after micellar water to double cleanse your face
- Wash your face with facial wash and water
- My favorite product is tea tree by the body shop
Major Support 3: Sheet Mask
Minor Support:
- It helps to moist your skin and get rid dull skin
- Apply your sheet mask for around 15 minutes and pat slowly
- My favorite product is mediheal sheet mask
Major Support 4: Essence
Minor Support:
- It helps nourish your skin
- Pour it in your hands and apply it to your face
- My favorite product is COSRX snail essence
Concluding sentence: all above is my night-time skincare routine, I love it because it’s makes my face glow in the next day.
c. Paragraph 3: Weekly exfoliating
ReplyDeletetopic sentence: exfoliation is removing your dry/dead skin cells on the surface of the skin and is one of the most important aspects of your home skincare routine for face and body, and exfoliation not only helps many skin problems, it also increases blood circulation, which in turn helps you to achieve healthy and glowing skin.
Major Support 1: Physical Exfoliation
Minor Support:
- physical exfoliant can be identified by its "sandy" texture and feels rough on the skin.
- My favorite product is St. Ives Blemish Control Apricot Scrub
Major Support 2: Chemical Exfoliation
Minor Support:
- Chemical exfoliants use enzymatic materials
- My favorite product is COSRX AHA/BHA Clarifying Treatment Toner
Major Support 3: Benefits of Exfoliation
Minor Support:
- Blemished Skin
- Clogged pores
- Pigmentation
Concluding sentence: that’s all kind of exfoliation, I don’t exfoliate with both types, and it’s important to do exfoliation because it renews your face skin and doing exfoliation have many benefits for your skin.
III. Concluding Paragraph:
In conclusion all the three-skincare routine I do is my favorite things, because beside it is healthy for your skin, it is also fun things to do. Not everyone has the same steps or the same skincare product they like but still, it’s very important to maintain your skin healthy and beauty especially when you are wearing makeup every day, because if your skin is amazing you will have a glowing vibe every day.
Revision:
ReplyDeleteB. ESSAY
Skincare routine
Skin care is the range of practices that support skin integrity, enhance its appearance and relieve skin conditions. Skin care is a routine daily procedure in many settings, such as skin that is either too dry or too moist, and prevention of dermatitis and prevention of skin injuries. it’s very important to take care your skin, and we need to do it routine. There are many steps in doing skincare and everyone has their own way and steps depends on their needs. My skincare routine is not really complicated, there are three types of my skincare routine, morning skincare routine, night-time skincare, and weekly exfoliation.
Morning face routine, morning skincare are important for your skin because it’s about protected and preserve your skin for all day activities and I like it because they also bring out your natural glow. First my skincare routine started with face wash, it is the first thing to do before applying any skincare, because with clean face any skincare are easily absorb. I wash my face with facial foam and rinse it with clean water. My favorite product is tea tree facial wash by the body shop. Second is toner, toner is a water-based liquid with vinegar-like consistency that contains active ingredients to help deal with certain problems, I usually applying it after facial wash for double cleansing and make sure it’s already clean, I poured few drops to cotton and wipe it to my face. My favorite toner is tea tree mattifying toner by the body shop. Third is serum, serum is like the vitamin for your skin, I usually use it by pour few drops into my hands, activate it and apply it to my face. My favorite serum is Vitamin E serum by the body shop. Fourth is Moisturizer, it helps your skin to hydrate and moist all day, you can take the moisturizer in your finger as much as you need and apply it to your face. My favorite product is soothing gel by nature republic. And the last is sunscreen, sunscreen will help protect my skin from UV A and UV B, and it is the most important skincare before starting the day, because the UV light can expose your skin even inside the building. I use sunscreen by apply a finger of it and apply it to my face and neck. My favorite product is daily protection from Elsheskin. That’s all the steps I need to prepare and protect my skin as my morning skincare routine, and I like it because it’s makes my face look good.
My next favorite things is doing Night-time skincare routine. Night-time skincare also important because it is aims to address skin issues before the regenerative process of sleep begins. The first step is Makeup remover, after using makeup all day long it’s important to clean them all before putting any skincare, I usually do it by pour few drops into cotton and wipe to your face. My favorite product is micellar water by Safi. Second is face wash, it is important to make sure there is no leftover makeup after cleaning it with micellar water or makeup remover, I usually wash my face with facial wash and clean them with warm water to relax my skin more. My favorite product is tea tree by the body shop. Third is sheet mask, Sheet masks are face masks that are sheet-shaped and are usually made of natural fibres such as paper, cotton, cellulose, or coconut pulp. This sheet usually has gone through a chemical process enriched with serum and water as its main ingredient. Generally, these masks are made with various vitamins, minerals and certain protein content according to the type and benefits offered. I like it because it helps my skin moist and get rid of dull skin, I usually use it for around 15 minutes, and after that I pat slowly my face to make the serum absorb more to my skin. My favorite product is mediheal sheet mask. The last part is essence, essence is like toner or oil which has high vitamin content and it helps nourish your skin. I like it because it nourishes my skin into the deepest part of my skin layers. My favorite product is COSRX snail essence. All above is my night-time skincare routine, I love it because it’s makes my face glow in the next day.
ReplyDeleteAnd the last is weekly exfoliating, exfoliation is removing your dry/dead skin cells on the surface of the skin and is one of the most important aspects of your home skincare routine for face and body, and exfoliation not only helps many skin problems, it also increases blood circulation, which in turn helps you to achieve healthy and glowing skin. There are two kind of exfoliation, first is Physical exfoliation. Physical exfoliant can be identified by its "sandy" texture and feels rough on the skin. Generally, the ingredients used in physical exfoliants are natural such as grains, sugar, salt, and plant extracts. I like physical exfoliation because the ingredients are natural so it’s safe for my skin and it removes all dead skin cells on my face. My favorite product is St. Ives Blemish Control Apricot Scrub. Second is Chemical exfoliation, in Chemical exfoliants they use enzymatic materials, the enzyme will then help spur the growth of new skin cells when dead skin cells have been lifted. I like chemical exfoliate because chemical exfoliator tends to be gentler when used compared to physical exfoliator. My favorite product is COSRX AHA/BHA Clarifying Treatment Toner. Doing exfoliation also has many benefits for our skin, they are good for Blemished Skin, because it is important for people with blemished skin to use an exfoliator on the face or body at least twice a week. Some people believe the best way to stop a break-out is to strip the skin, killing bacteria, but, this will also dry out the skin and cause irritation, so I usually use moisturizer to prevent dryness for my skin after exfoliating, and I like it because it helps my skin to stop break-out and give a natural glowing skin. Next exfoliation benefits is for clogged pores, if you suffer from clogged pores, exfoliation helps to draw out congestion, otherwise known as blackheads and whiteheads. Most common areas for breakouts are the nose, chin and forehead. Remember, twice a week max. I usually exfoliate my skin to prevent from the whitehead. And last to prevent pigmentation, pigmentation is the dark areas that come from age, pregnancy and changes in your hormonal balance. These areas tend to become more apparent and darker as the skin ages. Exfoliation is beneficial for breaking up pigmented cells, encouraging them to fade. I like to exfoliate my skin because it helps me to fade some dark area in my skin. That’s all kind of exfoliation, I don’t exfoliate with both types at one time, but still it’s important to do exfoliation because it renews your face skin and doing exfoliation has many benefits for your skin.
ReplyDeleteIn conclusion all the three-skincare routine I do is my favorite things, because beside it is healthy for your skin, it is also fun things to do. Not everyone has the same steps or the same skincare product they like but still, it’s very important to maintain your skin healthy and beauty especially when you are wearing makeup every day, because if your skin is amazing you will have a glowing vibe every day.